Monday, April 10, 2006

The Weeping of Rachel

Well this is still in the works. I think I'll probably add a bridge.

Verse1:
She weeps like a willow, her head low
Bent by bitter water, a bitter soul
There is no hope in her reflection
When she looks there is no alteration
And who could love such a woman
And who could see more than weeping

Chorus:
Sometimes love is best in grief
If redemption has a sound
Sometimes hope sleeps like beauty
If it’s lost it can be found
Sometimes pain strips our dignity
If a naked heart is what You crown

Verse2:
She weeps for the lonely, is she heard
Tears like a canyon river, bitter deep
There echoes of a comforting word
Nothing can separate us, no nothing
And she forgets all that is dying
And for a moment finds His love alive

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

hm...sounds like a power ballad to me...

...as I was reading it I got a melody in my brain...

...have you got music to this yet?

ps...i'm still fudging around with the guitar song...don't fret!! :)

...get it...fret...yuck yuck

Mad Frenchie said...

no melody yet...dad wants to work on it together. what chords were u thinking? thanks a bunch!

Anonymous said...

just fyi...got a keyboard today...woo hooo

Mad Frenchie said...

nice...what kind???